Some of the feedback I recieved from presenting my midterm were just simple things here and there that could help to polish up my article and my cover page just a little bit. Since I only had the pictures in my magazine from the two photo shoots, my peers said that I needed to have a little bit more variety in the pictures I was using. So I decided that I'd schedule a few extra shoots for these upcoming weeks so that I can get the models in different outfits and possibly at a few different locations. Another thing was that the photo on my cover page was good and interesting with the setup and the lighting of it. The only problem was that it was too grainy, so I am going to take the original photo and edit it so that it doesn't come out as fuzzy. Another thing I am going to change is the layout of my two page article. I was looking back over it and seeing how closely it resembled an actual published magazine while still holding its uniqueness. I noticed it doesn't look as sl...